I’ve been re-reading Rex Stout’s Nero Wolfe mysteries, and enjoying them thoroughly. One of the things that’s particularly striking this time through is the way that Archie Goodwin describes the various people he runs into.
But wait a moment. You do know who Archie Goodwin is, don’t you? You are familiar with his narrative voice, aren’t you?
You aren’t? Then what are you wasting your time here for? Get thee to Amazon, or any other bookstore or library of your choice, and begin feasting! (I use the word advisedly.)
OK. I love the way Archie describes people. He doesn’t emphasize the physical details, but somehow he manages to package up their appearance, their character, and his opinion of them all in a very few color words. For example,
She looked more like a school teacher— or maybe it would be more accurate to say that she looked like what a school teacher looks like before the time comes that she absolutely looks like a school teacher and nothing else.
— Rex Stout, in Black Orchids
And then,
Colonel Tinkham, who looked like a collection of undersized features put together at random in order to have somewhere to stick a little brown mustache, had had some kind of a gumshoe job for a big New York bank.
Rex Stout, in Not Quite Dead Enough
I’ve been collecting these; I’ll start doling them out over the next few weeks.