The Crown of Dalemark is the fourth and last volume (surprise, surprise) of Diana Wynne Jone’s Dalemark Quartet, and as I hinted yesterday it has its problems.
In this book, it is clear from the get go, Jones is going to weave together all of the threads from the first three books; and it is equally clear that by the end of the book some character we’re already familiar with is going to pull together the earldoms of the North and South into a single kingdom again. It’s not clear which of them it will be (though I had a shrewd guess) or how it will take place; therein lies the tale.
And of course there are the Undying floating about all over the place.
I remember reading Great Expectations in school, many years ago now, and being amazed how Dickens managed to bring out hidden relationships between all of the myriad characters in the book. The cast of characters, each one seemingly isolated, were all part of a web of relationships that in fact drew them tightly together. Part of the charm of the book was discovering each of these relationships as the book progresses—I vaguely remember a housekeeper with peculiarly strong hands who turns out to be the estranged wife of somebody else, for example. Keeping track of everything was dizzying.
The situation is similar here, except that each of the Undying seem to have multiple names, most of which we’ve heard before but hadn’t previously connected together, and many of which we’ve heard only in conjunction with legends that are alluded to but not actually spelled out in the course of the series. You kind of need a scorecard to keep track.
And then, Jones pulls in a young girl from a hundred years or so into Dalemark’s future, and makes her one of the major viewpoint characters, which just complicates things all the more. It all worked out OK—I enjoyed reading it—and it left me wanting more, which is always a good sign; but nevertheless it didn’t quite work.