It’s a little known fact that Shakespeare generally worked out the plot of each play in the form of lyric poetry before writing the actual work. Some of these poems have been preserved; Brandywine Books has the scoop.

Really, I hadn’t intended to take such a long break. But I haven’t finished any books (though I’m working on some good ones) and then, The Incredibles DVD arrived in the mail yesterday. Jane and I watched it last night, since Jane wasn’t able to see it in the theater, and then we all of us sat down this evening and watched it again–along with the new short, “Jack-Jack Attack”, which is simply outstanding.

Tomorrow is Pinewood Derby Day (if it doesn’t rain), about which I might have more to say anon; but now, I must go and catch up on my e-mail. TTFN!

Yesterday, I’m not particularly ashamed to admit, I fell from grace with respect to my diet. For over a month I had been good, only eating food that was on the prescribed list. But last night, Jane and I had to leave home at 4:30 to get to a meeting over an hour away which would then run for another several hours; there was simply no time to have a normal meal.

So we went to In’N’Out Burger, and I got a Double Double, “Protein Style”. That means it comes wrapped in lettuce leaves instead of in a bun. Yes, for the first time in a month I got to have some red meat and cheese without “low-fat” in its name. It was delicious.

In fact, my mouth is watering just thinking about it.

Lars Walker is guest-blogging over at Brandywine Books; time to take a look. (Lars is the author of a number of books I reviewed some time back, including the excellent historical fantasy The Year of the Warrior.)

I really wish I could say that I liked this book, which is an anthology
of Charnas’ short fiction. She writes well, and the stories kept my
attention; there’s certainly no lack of quality here. So why did I find
them so uncongenial? I’ve been pondering this, and I’ve come up with a
number of reasons.

To begin with, there are the vampires. I like a good monster as well as
the next person, but I’m not really down with the whole psychosexual Anne
Rice vampire thing. It does nothing for me. For what it’s worth I
suppose I like Charnas’ vampires better than Rice’s.

Next, there’s the style. Although work of book-length fiction is
commonly called a “novel” these days, there’s an important distinction
between the novel proper and the romance. I don’t want to go into it in
detail here, but simply put, in a novel the action is largely internal
and in a romance the action is largely external. Many books work in both
ways, of course, and those are the ones I tend to prefer, but otherwise
I’ll take a straight romance instead of a straight novel most days of the
week.

Anyway, in my view Charnas is using romantic conventions (vampires,
werewolves, and so forth) to write stories which aren’t romances at all.
All of the important action is inward, inside the characters. I don’t say
that this is bad; but I do say that it’s not to my taste.

The third problem is exacerbated by the second, and that’s the worldview,
Charnas’ model for how the world works and how (consequently) people can
change. She and I clearly have different assumptions about some basic
things, enough that her characters feel somewhat alien to me, and the
manner in which they evolve is unconvincing. I kept founding myself
saying, “But the world isn’t like that. People aren’t like that.”
It might seem silly to lay stress on this over stories that are overt
works of fantasy, but the internal component is so important to the story
that it typically overwhelms the plot. If it doesn’t work, the story
doesn’t work. And in this case, it doesn’t mesh with my own experience
of life.

All that said, there’s some striking storytelling going on here. The
first tale extends the Phantom of the Opera; what if lovely Christine
chose the ugly Phantom over handsome Raoul? Why would she, and what
would follow from it? Another tells of a girl on the brink of womanhood
who discovers that the full moon brings out the wolf in her–and that this
offers the means to a highly desired end. Another takes place at a
performance of Tosca at the Opera House in Santa Fe, New Mexico,
during which Puccini’s music drives a vampire wild; the description was
crystal clear and almost made me wish I was there–though the plot itself
was negligible and not very interesting.

I suppose my least favorite moment comes during a story called
Peregrines, which was written just last year; its background is so
clearly a liberal nightmare of post-Bush America, and yet it’s just too
absurd. Let’s see. In this future America you need a permit from
Homeland Security to travel from one of the 50 states to another. Anyone
who looks or speaks differently than their neighbors is liable to be
taken away by Homeland Security for “questioning”; such people don’t come
back. This is all due to the victory of the Fundies, who got control
after terrorists bombed the Status of Liberty.

Now, this is all background, and most of it is superfluous to the story.
The essential thing is the specter of the secret police, which is used to
add suspense; the rest is gratuitous. The only reason I can think of for
why Charnas included it is because it seems like a real threat to her.
She really thinks that the “Fundies” want to turn to turn America into a
police state where immigrants are harassed and oppressed merely for their
looks and language.

The kicker, for me, was the reference to the terrorists bombing the
Statue of Liberty. Dude, the Statue of Liberty is a major American
landmark, sure. But the significance of September 11th isn’t that a
pair of landmarks were bombed and subsequently collapsed. The significance
of September 11th is due to the 3000 people who didn’t get out in
time–or who tried to fly.

Frankly, it rubbed me the wrong way.

Anyway, those are the reasons why I can’t say I liked the book. On the
other hand–if Charnas’ style is the kind of thing that appeals to you,
you should check it out; she definitely knows her craft.

Woo-hoo! The Wallace and Gromit feature is scheduled to be released this October. Here’s a trailer. Any guesses who’s hardware they are using for post-production?

Ian Hamet has been
raving about this movie for as long as I’ve known him, so when it was
re-released here in the states I was quick to grab a copy. And I’m
pleased to say that I was not disappointed, for it is indeed a truly
charming movie. My favorite Miyazaki to date is still
Spirited Away; but then, Porco Rosso is a
different kind of movie altogether, and it doesn’t seem like it should be
rated on the same scale.

Porco Rosso is a tale of a brave and skillful seaplane
pilot who lives on an island in the Adriatic sea in the time between the
world wars, when Italy was sliding into fascism. He makes his money as a
bounty hunter; the Adriatic, evidently, is home to scads of air pirates
(Miyazaki has a thing for air pirates), all of whom fly various
interesting kinds of seaplanes and prey on the local shipping. It’s
Porco’s job to find them, stop them, retrieve their booty and free their
hostages–and, of course, to get paid for it.

The odd thing about Porco is that he has the face and ears of a pig. He
wasn’t born that way; he’s evidently under some kind of curse. But it
makes him an outsider, and allows him to speak harsh truths others don’t
want to recognize. They call him on it, of course; they say to him,
“Porco, you really are a pig!”

I don’t want to say too much about the plot for fear of spoiling it.
But there are cute little girls, and ugly poorly-washed air pirates (and an
interesting mixture they make, I might add), and a pretty girl and a
beautiful woman and lots and lots of planes and flying scenes and dog
fights and a rivalry and an adolescent crush and serious aeronautical
engineering–and, I think, something like redemption. If I’m reading it
right (and Ian will no doubt correct me if I’m wrong),
Porco Rosso isn’t a fantasy at all, despite its snouted
hero. Rather, it’s an excursion into the world of magic realism.

As for the animation, it’s simply stunning throughout. I don’t have
words to describe how beautiful it was–or how funny. It’s not a
comedy as such, but I think I must have had a dopey grin on my face the
whole time I watched it. My favorite funny bit is when all of the air
pirates try to get their picture taken with the lovely young Fio. It’s
just a moment, there and gone, but it’s perfectly done.

I watched it with the new English soundtrack, which I thought was very
well done. Disney once again made some surprising choices for voice
actors that nevertheless worked out perfectly–even if you’d never guess
who they were until the credits scrolled by.

Anyway, Porco Rosso is in the stores now. You should find
a copy and settle in with some popcorn.

Don’t forget the popcorn; it’s very important. I didn’t get to have any,
since I’m on a strict low-carb diet, and I really think you should eat
some for me. Thank you.

When I first read this some while back,
I said that it was interesting but too short to be worth the nine dollars I’d paid
for it. I got lots of e-mail over that, mostly saying something like,
“Will, you just don’t get it.”

I still don’t.

At bedtime just a couple of nights ago I finished reading this book to my
two boys. And when I had read the last sentence, I closed the book with
great relief and a feeling of liberation. I was done. I didn’t have to
to read it aloud anymore. For the first time I felt glad at how short
it was.

To be frank, I can’t think of a book I’ve read aloud that I disliked
reading aloud more than this book. It’s not that it’s poorly written,
or that the prose doesn’t flow; there’s just something about the
atmosphere, and the arch little asides to the reader, and the unrelenting
gloom that made for a thoroughly awful experience.

For what it’s worth, James agreed with me, and we finished it only at
David’s request. After the first few days, I began every reading session
with “I hate this book. You know that, don’t you.” And David would say,
“Yes,” and James would say, “So do I,” and then we’d get on with it.

David’s been put on notice that he can read the other books in the series
if he likes, but if so he’ll be reading them to himself. I’m out of it.

Had a check-up with the doctor today–she’s pleased with my progress, keep on doing the same, and come back next month–but the big news is that I’m down 13 pounds.

This is a lovely book; I took an evening earlier this week and just
wallowed in it.

This is yet another of Lovesey’s Peter Diamond novels; it takes place
just about a year after Diamond Dust. Diamond is back in
the saddle, and working with his team–I said, after the last book, that
I was really looking forward to seeing Diamond working with his team
instead of investigating as a loner, and I got my wish–but he still
hasn’t really come to terms with the death of his wife.

Meanwhile, there’s a murder on a beach in another county; the victim
proves to be from Bath, which drags Diamond in, and further turns out
to have been a “profiler”, working in a very hush hush murder case–could
there be a link? The Powers That Be say “No!”; Diamond says “Maybe!”;
you figure out.

There are lots of lovely bits in this book, but I won’t spoil them for
you; I’ll just say that the first chapter is as neat a bit of deception
as I’ve come across in a long while, and that we might have spotted a new
love interest for Diamond.